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The Kamikaze Geisha has returned;
just slit your wrist and learn,
the way in which I write—
expressing myself with all my might.

I'll type out letters,
to let you see;
I'll paint pictures,
to bring understanding;
and most of all, I'm willing
to BLEED,
if that's what it takes to get
my point across.

Yes, I'm the Kamikaze:
listening to the divine wind for
inspiration;
ready to DIE at a moment's notice.
If you understand,
then my life's been worth it.

Hai! Tak! Ja!
The Geisha is who I am—
"Artist": that's what it means,
paint, pencil, ink—
curves, lines, and A,B,C's—
Just trying to express my heart
in every medium, known to
woman.
God gave me a little gift,
now I'll waste my life trying to use it.

Got it clear?
What my name means?
Just who I am.
An Artist— with words in her palette.
A suicidal— dying a little everyday for what's right.

God speaks,
            I write;
                        God's pleased,
                                                I die.
©2008-2009 ~KamikazeGeisha
:iconkamikazegeisha:

Author's Comments

WARNING: MATURE CONTENT FILTER MAY BE PUT ON DUE TO SUICIDAL SUBJECT MATTER, EVEN THOUGH THE WRITTER IS NOT GOING TO DIE ANY TIME SOON.

Written, 1st edit: 6/29/08 @ 3PM
Second Edit: 7/7/08

Well...
I was thinking of a way to try to get across why I chose "KamikazeGeisha" as my DA name. And then it hit me: a poem!
So yes, this is what I thought when thinking of my name. If you don't get it, just leave a comment and I'll explain in non-poetic terms :D

For those who don't know foriegn languages:
kamikaze= (Jap.) divine wind spirit
geisha= (Jap.) artist
Hai= (Jap.) Affirmative!
Ja= (Ger.) Yes
Tak= (Pol.) Yes.

I'm still not sure about the category... its probably incorrect. I don't know...
I'm definitely thinking of using this for the next poetry slam... I wonder what Mrs. B.'ll do to me....

EDIT: 10/19/08
It seems my mom looked at this poem. I think all the death words scared her. So I thought I might want to mention(and I think most people understood this) that the focus isn't supposed to be on death... More like art, zeal, and divine will. I guess its really hidden? I just wanted to use powerful images; sadly, death is powerful from where I'm sitting.
/End EDIT

Criticism Highly Encouraged. This includes Literary Criticism

(c) Ana D.R., aka the KAMIKAZEGEISHA

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:iconwinxgirl21:
*claps* I like it a lot. *nods head* it does describe who you are, although it could do without the suicidal part, lol. unles you're planning something that we don't know about...jk. =D

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~*Live life to the fullest, and never turn back*~

Treasure what you have in life now, because you could lose it in the blink of an eye~
:iconkamikazegeisha:
Yay!
By "suicidal part: do you mean the line after "An Artist---..."?

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I've decided to make my signature into a shameful advertisement for a Naruto fanfic. Because I have no decency: [link]
~~I <3 Chemistry~~
~Yes, I made my avatar~
:iconwinxgirl21:
mmm...ya.

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~*Live life to the fullest, and never turn back*~

Treasure what you have in life now, because you could lose it in the blink of an eye~
:iconman-cool:
That is a very cool and deep looking writing!!! I really love it!!! :) Great work.

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13 Now all has been heard; here is the conclusion of the matter: Fear God and keep his commandments, for this is the whole duty of man.
14 For God will bring every deed into judgment, including every hidden thing, whether it is good or evil.
:iconkamikazegeisha:
Wow. Thank you very much!
And double thanks for the favorite*hugs*
Mind if I ask how it is deep looking?

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I've decided to make my signature into a shameful advertisement for a Naruto fanfic. Because I have no decency: [link]
~~I <3 Chemistry~~
~Yes, I made my avatar~
:iconkamikazegeisha:
Ahh... i guess its technically unneeded, but I liked the idea of "dying a little everyday". Cause when you think about it, we all die a little eveeryday.
Depressing, I know, but true.*hugs*

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I've decided to make my signature into a shameful advertisement for a Naruto fanfic. Because I have no decency: [link]
~~I <3 Chemistry~~
~Yes, I made my avatar~
:iconman-cool:
It has a very cool and deep writing and then it tells what a geisha really is. That makes it really cool!!! :)

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13 Now all has been heard; here is the conclusion of the matter: Fear God and keep his commandments, for this is the whole duty of man.
14 For God will bring every deed into judgment, including every hidden thing, whether it is good or evil.
:iconkamikazegeisha:
Ok, gotcha.
Again, Arigato.

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I've decided to make my signature into a shameful advertisement for a Naruto fanfic. Because I have no decency: [link]
~~I <3 Chemistry~~
~Yes, I made my avatar~
:iconwinxgirl21:
hmm..I guess that is kinda true.

--
~*Live life to the fullest, and never turn back*~

Treasure what you have in life now, because you could lose it in the blink of an eye~

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